First Cut and Developments

On Thursday's lesson, we watched one another's productions, and gave feedback. Our video received positive feedback for our titles, as they looked professional and appropriate for the task, though we also received negative feedback, which bascially summed up as; film more!

Our First Cut

In order to improve our video, we intend to do some more filming over the Christmas period, and maybe even edit a second draft at home, rather than juts having one at school.
I also wanted to make our video appear professional and realistic, so I decided to design a DVD cover for when I burn our video onto a blank DVD. 

I used the film poster that Amber designed to create a DVD cover including fictitious quotes from newspapers to make the cover appear more professional. 
Though it is not entirely finished yet, as I haven't put our film company logo, or name on the back, I think that this would fully round off the film to make it seem very realistic, and authentic, just like any other film available today. 
All we need to do now... Is film more shots!!!!!!